Post by xergrim on Oct 28, 2005 22:21:22 GMT -5
This sucker just started to put up actual comics today, and I wanted to give this review thing a shot.
Sprites: Everyone looks pretty good except for Jack. Jack... has issues. It seems that every time an edited Sonic sprite is used, the creator refuses to edit it anymore, and we get crap like the third panel of "Damn! It's the cops!" That's a sprite for falling down, not for screaming. Also, Jack seems to have a randomly appearing mouth. Sadly, the guy gets lazy and has the other people talking with their mouths closed as well from time to time. And in "The Tacos are Mine!" the guy in the background seems to have a brain tumor. 7/10.
Backgrounds: Absolutely stunning backgrounds. Some of them I've never seen before, like the one in "Damn! It's the Cops!" so I assume they're custom. Major props to this guy being one hell of an artist. 10/10.
Humor: Here's where I have to drop the hammer. His jokes have sucked, hard. And the one good joke I found was ruined by a lame response. See "The Plan." 1/10.
Spelling and Grammar: He can spell just fine. Hasn't screwed up with grammar yet either. 10/10.
Plot: The plot blows too. It's like an 8 year old is making it up as he goes along. Why are the cops after Jack and Tim? Why was there a fight with no-name in "Never!"? Chances are we'll never know. 1/10.
Popularity: N/A
Overall: 3/10. Think of it as a highly polished turd. I hope the guy gets better and comes up with a real plot and some real personalities. I'm too jaded to laugh at stupid stereotypes now.
Sprites: Everyone looks pretty good except for Jack. Jack... has issues. It seems that every time an edited Sonic sprite is used, the creator refuses to edit it anymore, and we get crap like the third panel of "Damn! It's the cops!" That's a sprite for falling down, not for screaming. Also, Jack seems to have a randomly appearing mouth. Sadly, the guy gets lazy and has the other people talking with their mouths closed as well from time to time. And in "The Tacos are Mine!" the guy in the background seems to have a brain tumor. 7/10.
Backgrounds: Absolutely stunning backgrounds. Some of them I've never seen before, like the one in "Damn! It's the Cops!" so I assume they're custom. Major props to this guy being one hell of an artist. 10/10.
Humor: Here's where I have to drop the hammer. His jokes have sucked, hard. And the one good joke I found was ruined by a lame response. See "The Plan." 1/10.
Spelling and Grammar: He can spell just fine. Hasn't screwed up with grammar yet either. 10/10.
Plot: The plot blows too. It's like an 8 year old is making it up as he goes along. Why are the cops after Jack and Tim? Why was there a fight with no-name in "Never!"? Chances are we'll never know. 1/10.
Popularity: N/A
Overall: 3/10. Think of it as a highly polished turd. I hope the guy gets better and comes up with a real plot and some real personalities. I'm too jaded to laugh at stupid stereotypes now.