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Post by Cutter on Feb 28, 2008 21:56:36 GMT -5
This is a Flash animation I've been working on for a while now. It was supposed to be my Animation final, but it wasn't done in time. I showed what I had then, and it was fine, but I still want to finish the animation. Here's what I have so far (hosted on Zib's website, since Photobucket sucks now): www.zibland.com/stuff/Hosting/Final.htmlIt's pretty much a ripoff of the Rockman Neo animation on Newgrounds, audiowise at least, but based on a story of mine. Anyway, could I get some feedback on it?
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Post by Gen Gravy on Mar 2, 2008 1:03:28 GMT -5
A lot better than what I could do.
My only problem with it is the scene where the frost guy and what I assume is a shadow element guy are facing off. The two translucent heads that just float over them... Not big enough, or you can split the screen in two and have a close up on each in each half.
And when the frost guy transformed, he kinda just crumpled up and wings just suddenly burst out of his back. You could just throw a flashing effect over him to at least cover him while he changes.
Otherwise, I liked it.
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Post by Cutter on Mar 2, 2008 1:17:29 GMT -5
The introduction before it says "Project Gemini" is very unfinished at this point. There's a lot that isn't there yet, and when I go back to edit it later I'll definitely make that scene a lot better. Even so, there probably won't be a flash of light, the wings are supposed to attach to him as they do right now... Except I'll animate it better.
And yeah, I don't have much else to say because it's still not close to done.
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Post by Gen Gravy on Mar 2, 2008 1:23:10 GMT -5
Yah, the heads and crumpling are the only problems I have. I figured it wasn't close to done, seeing how the ending doesn't really... End.
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Post by Kyle20 on Mar 6, 2008 11:43:48 GMT -5
Pretty good.
The art could'ven been better/more detailed/proportional. But, then again, quicker art = quicker/easier Flash, so you usually have to sacrifice one for the other.
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Post by Cutter on Apr 22, 2008 21:36:14 GMT -5
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Post by Kyle20 on Apr 24, 2008 10:49:24 GMT -5
What's the music at the "good part"?
Sounds very familiar.
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Post by Cutter on Apr 24, 2008 11:42:17 GMT -5
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Post by Kyle20 on Apr 24, 2008 12:06:43 GMT -5
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Never seen it, actually.
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Post by Cutter on Apr 24, 2008 14:32:12 GMT -5
Ah, okay. It used to be the #1 or #2 highest rated movie on Newgrounds. That was back when I went there...
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Post by Kyle20 on Apr 25, 2008 14:12:04 GMT -5
Meh. I just lurk Newgrounds once in a blue moon, and usually only visit there if someone links me to it for a video.
What was on the top lists was of no concern to me.
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Post by Cutter on Apr 25, 2008 16:57:10 GMT -5
Incredibly, it seems to have gotten worse since I last visited. And thats saying something.
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Post by Kyle20 on Apr 25, 2008 21:55:39 GMT -5
That's because nobody makes anything decent anymore.
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Post by Cutter on Aug 15, 2008 6:23:32 GMT -5
I might as well explain the situation on this. Basically, I bought a drive to specifically back up all my stuff for when I moved, and it came with software... And uh, you can see where this going. The software didn't back up certain files... Including .exes and Flash files.
I have an older version of the .fla, but to be honest it's missing enough work to make me not want to work on it until I get access to the original file back in America, which I'll be able to get in like a year. Plus I don't have Flash CS3 anymore, since that was an exe. Instead I'm stuck with Flash MX 2004 again, which means I can't even open the older .fla. T_T
So by then I'll probably be working on something else.
Ugh, in order words the animation is on hiatus, and its entirely possible I won't finish it.
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Post by Cutter on Dec 31, 2008 7:22:40 GMT -5
Time to revive a thread!
I have made no progress on that old animation in quite a long time, but I thought I'd post here saying that I'm working on a new animation, and this one will actually be completed. I'll post a preview when I have a long enough segment of it that's entirely finished. So far there are just scenes all over the place, so I can't really show that.
I'll post something here sooner or later, though. Exciting, I know.
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