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Mar 2, 2006 23:32:01 GMT -5
Post by Zaku on Mar 2, 2006 23:32:01 GMT -5
I said it was inspiration.
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Mar 2, 2006 23:38:27 GMT -5
Post by Gen Gravy on Mar 2, 2006 23:38:27 GMT -5
Yeah... It needs bigger shoulder things. And Gen... your sprite is awesome. I love drawing it, 'cause its easy. Sadly, you aren't in the Valentines script taht you made for comic number 4 Guess you should have gotten the third script then. It was all me, but Kyle did it, and left to you the longest one. That's life, eh? Zaku, I gotta say that the new author sprite looks good... But I think the legs could use some more stuff. Their are just plain, and make it look lazy.
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Mar 2, 2006 23:47:55 GMT -5
Post by Zaku on Mar 2, 2006 23:47:55 GMT -5
I'll add more.
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Mar 2, 2006 23:56:39 GMT -5
Post by Zaku on Mar 2, 2006 23:56:39 GMT -5
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Mar 3, 2006 19:14:18 GMT -5
Post by Kyle20 on Mar 3, 2006 19:14:18 GMT -5
Looking good. The last shade (especially on the legs) looks too dark. It looks like it skips from white to black. Try to lighten that last shade up.
The marking on the leg is okay, but shouldn't it be on the other leg too?
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Mar 3, 2006 19:18:00 GMT -5
Post by Cutter on Mar 3, 2006 19:18:00 GMT -5
The sudden black shading makes it appear cartoonish. Like Kyle said, it's too dark.
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Mar 3, 2006 19:20:11 GMT -5
Post by Zaku on Mar 3, 2006 19:20:11 GMT -5
Kyle- It's not a marking. It's a Tag.
Cutter- I think it looks fine.
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Mar 3, 2006 19:24:34 GMT -5
Post by Kyle20 on Mar 3, 2006 19:24:34 GMT -5
Marking, tag, whatever. Just make the last shade ALITTLE lighter, and see what it looks like. You may change your mind, and it may only apply to the legs. It'll take two seconds, worth a try...
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Mar 3, 2006 19:27:50 GMT -5
Post by champtim on Mar 3, 2006 19:27:50 GMT -5
I think it looks nice.
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Mar 3, 2006 19:29:22 GMT -5
Post by Zaku on Mar 3, 2006 19:29:22 GMT -5
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Mar 3, 2006 19:30:13 GMT -5
Post by Kyle20 on Mar 3, 2006 19:30:13 GMT -5
Hmm...that looks good. Now apply that to the arm and shoulder. But you can leave the glove.
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Mar 3, 2006 19:31:10 GMT -5
Post by Zaku on Mar 3, 2006 19:31:10 GMT -5
No.
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Mar 3, 2006 19:31:35 GMT -5
Post by Kyle20 on Mar 3, 2006 19:31:35 GMT -5
.....okay. Fine, whatever...
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Mar 3, 2006 19:32:54 GMT -5
Post by Zaku on Mar 3, 2006 19:32:54 GMT -5
I need to work on new positions. My goal is to have 1 new position every day.
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Mar 3, 2006 20:10:27 GMT -5
Post by holyknight on Mar 3, 2006 20:10:27 GMT -5
the 1st shadings are too bright... but looks cool
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